Monday 16 January 2012

New improved script


E L E M 3 N T S





Written by

Joseph Marshall, Pete Wall and Ashley Hough




                                                                      Story by

Joseph Marshall, Pete Wall and Ashley Hough



1. EXT: BOURNEMOUTH TOWN, MAIN TOWN, DAYLIGHT.

-BEACH-

Few people walk along the beach walking dogs and enjoying the sun.

CUT TO:


-MAIN CITY-

We are above the city (wide shot) showing the tall building and cars down below that pass.

CUT TO:

-BEACH-

We focus onto a Scarlett who is sat on a wall eating and drinking. Then her phone goes off and she pulls her phone out of her coat pocket then opens the message.

We need to meet. Usual place, need to sort this mess out”

CUT TO:

-PARK-

We see a variety of shots of Scarlett walking through the park, towards the meeting place.

The final shot of Scarlett we see is her using her power to heat up her coffee, the shot turn into a comic / drawing as the title appears.


EXT: MAIN TOWN SHOPPING CENTRE, DAYLIGHT.

Outside the entrance of the shopping centre a young woman approaches with loads of designer shopping bags. Then she stops and pulls her phone out.

We need to sort this mess out, meet at usual place.”

Autumn looks confused and starts to look around, not sure what to do.

AUTUMN

Bloody hell

CUT TO:


EXT: GARDENS/PARK, DAYLIGHT.

She walks through the same gardens that Scarlett walked through. She walks past some flowers and they quickly die showing how powerful her powers her mixed with her emotions and feelings.



CUT TO:


EXT: CAFÉ, MAIN TOWN, DAYLIGHT.

Outside a café we are CU on a glass of water. It is picked up and a few seconds later the glass is put down and is empty. Then the hand floats over the glass and it fills with water again. (CARTOON SHOT STILL) The hand picks up the glass and we follow it and come to a woman called Flo.

As she takes a gulp of it we CUT TO A POV and the glass in out and face and then come away, in front are Scarlett and Autumn standing there looking annoyed.(THEN WE CUT TO A COMIC BOOK STYLED FRAMES WITH THE THREE GIRLS EYES IN EACH FRAME)

We then pan from Flo and come to the main sign of the café that reads “ELEMENTS” across the window. FADE INTO title card of Elements with the third E switching round into a 3.



CUT TO:


A few minutes later the girls are all sat outside just sitting there not talking at all to each other but then Flo breaks the silence.



FLO

Oh for god’s sake girls! I didn’t text you to come here, drink coffee and not even bother talking.



AUTUMN

What is there to talk about? The past is the past, it stays like that.



SCARLETT

I agree with Autumn, let’s just keep with our own ways now.


                                                                             FLO

Oh come on girls at one point we were notorious and now, I’m working in a shop Scarlett is unemployed and you Autumn, well you’re doing well but still that’s not the point. We need to fix what happened in the past, I don’t mean go back to our old ways but at least be friends again.

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